While reading Sounds
of the Day, a poem by Norman MacCaig very many questions came to mind.
Like, what is a lapwing? It is a bird that is popular in Europe. But, what is
its significance? Why was it escorting you off of the premises of its private
marsh? Was this a place that you and a loved one once shared? Was this place by
the water close to the home of you and the loved one you speak of?
“When the door scraped shut, it was the end of all the
sounds there are.” When who left is what I might ask? Are you talking about a
lover, your wife or your mother? If it is in fact a lover I would believe that
the day they left would be the end of all sounds, because all joy is gone and
there is nothing left to hear and when there is nothing left to hear there is
nothing left to feel.
“You left me beside the quietest fire in the world,” once
again who left? What is the fires significance? Could it be a reference to the
flame in your heart not crackling like it is supposed to; instead it is silent?
Why did your lover leave you? Why was it the quietest fire in the world?
“I thought I was hurt in my pride only, forgetting that, when
you plunge your hand in freezing water, you feel a bangle of ice around your
wrist before the whole hand goes numb.” When someone you love leaves you, you
never only hurt in your pride you hurt in your heart as well. When you refer to
your hand are you also playing around with the idea that it is your heart that
is numb, from whoever left you leaving your heart in shambles.`
In this short poem I have asked questions about the things
that puzzle and mystify me. I believe the point the writer is trying to get
across, is that when he was in love, everything that his lover and he shared
had sound. I think that when his lover left the last sound he heard was the
door scraping shut. He was left by a quiet fire. When I think of a fire I think
of a good time and laughter and the fire hot and crackling. But, the narrator
says he was left by a quiet fire, how lonely must that be? But, could the fire
be symbolizing his love for the person he is talking about? The narrator goes
on to say that he was “hurt in my pride only, forgetting that, when you plunge
your hand into freezing water…before the whole hand goes numb.” Like I said
above I believe he is referring to his heart going numb from his lover leaving
him.
You've nailed the poem, Christina, and this is a subtle work.
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